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Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

That realization that the “intruder” was never outside, but something within… I think a lot of us can relate to that more than we’d like to admit. The mirror scene was incredibly powerful, especially the self-forgiveness, being able to meet yourself there and not turn away.

Maria Matheou's avatar

It's never easy looking into mirrors. Reflections have a lot to say. Impressive writing.

Miles Hack's avatar

I liked how this story took the initial roller coaster ride and then circled back to the reality that it’s difficult to run away from yourself when you’re you.

Had a lot to it, and the writing format increased the dynamic tension greatly — loved it, & loved yourself 📫❣️🔓

C.C. Harlow's avatar

The use of the formatting is so brilliant! Your mastery of rhythm is so impressive, I have lessons to take from you! Amazing read.

✨Beautifully Broken✨'s avatar

I'm here. I read the whole thing. Nice job friend.

Tim Chessher's avatar

The alternative reality is very interesting here. Your writing showed the reflection well :)

Diana Kerievsky's avatar

Thank you. I will try to post it. Diana

Diana Kerievsky's avatar

I recently took a photo of this moon 🌕

Laura B Writing in the Shadows's avatar

Wow! What a hauntingly fantastic way to share the conversations we have with our inner child... loved this, hermanito 🖤

Holly Campana's avatar

I haven’t had an income in nearly 5 years so I cannot subscribe. I wish I could have had disability going on. It’s fourth time now Social Security so that’s why I cannot.

Ink and Light by Nat Hale's avatar

Holly that is why you dont have to pay to subcribe to me at any level. I am fortunate enough to have paid employment so don't need to make an income from my writing. I want everyone to have equal access to what I share. I will never ask you for money or have different levels of suscribers. Others do because I need to make an income. I am lucky enough not to need to . Engage however you want

HVR's avatar

I can get that.

Kristina Ray's avatar

Wow, great job with subverting our expectations! I loved it, very powerful!

theinkspilled's avatar

This is courage, empowerment, reframing your history, taking a step toward healing. It’s truly amazing.

Hannah Torkelson's avatar

This really hooked me. It's true that looking within can be this intense.

Assemblywoman Debra Mazzarelli's avatar

Loved it, gave me sense of possibilities and empowerment and hope…

Nabanita's avatar

Moment of reckoning between your younger and older self was unforgettable!